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In the section "Discharging characteristics - Rule of thumb" there are a number of "it's" that should be "its". Too, there's a sentence fragment "which is quickly dropping to" which would probably sound better as "which quickly drops to".

Many thanks for the book!

frank S.


I enjoyed reading your book, especially the case studies. I found a couple minor typos:

Page 215:, line 8-9: This rural city, which seems more more like a big village, sits up the the river Niger just before it dips South crossing into Niger and onto Nigeria.

page 225 10 lines from bottom: For this first phase, a more thorough security system was left to be implemented in the future,, when time could be found to find an easier interface for controlling access.

Philip D, København


page 15 "For a complete list of channels ... see Appendix A" should be Appendix B

page 44 "WiFi cards made by Intel that are shipped with Centrino Notebooks are notorious to do this." change end to "... notorious for doing this"

page 44 "Fragmentation allows to split an IP packet in a burst of smaller fragments transmitted on the medium." to "Fragmentation allows you/your computer to split an IP packet into a burst of smaller fragments transmitted on the medium."

page 45 "Setting fragmentation threshold is recommended." to "Setting the fragmentation ..."

page 46 "ueberprotocol" to uberprotocol

page 52 "Parabolic antennas have a gain of 19-24 dBm, omnidirectional antennas have 5-12 dBi, sectorial antennas have roughly a 12-15 dBi gain." should the dBm actually be dBi?

page 103, "brass wire of 2mm of diameter" -> "brass wire of 2mm diameter"

page 104, "with the help of the vice and of the hammer" -> "with the help of the vice and hammer"

page 109 "Using the use the vice and the pliers ..." -> "Using the vice and the pliers ..."

page 113 "brass wire of 2mm of diameter" -> "brass wire of 2mm diameter"

page 115 "Smooth with the file one end of the wire" -> "With the file, smooth one end of the wire"

page 131 towards end of second paragraph, "much more current the the sensitive radio equipment can handle" -> "much more current than the sensitive radio equipment can handle"

page 133 last paragraph, for consistency, "Gnu/Linux" should be "GNU/Linux"

page 135 3rd paragraph "Start of with an ..." -> "Start off with an ..."

page 140 in the first example set up, on the 8th line "... wlan 0 ..." should be "... wlan0 ..."

page 174 2nd paragraph "... not too much clearance that ..." -> "... not so much clearance that ..."

page 205 end of 4th paragraph "eemailmails" -> "emails"

Hamish D, Aidworld


page 8, "Electromagnetic forces" section, 3rd paragraph, 2nd line:

"the electrons from one and to the other and back" should be "the electrons from one end to the other and back"

T Chan


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